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Отредактируйте текст,кто может. Согласуйте грамматически и синтаксически. My working day begins in 15 minutes second, when my studies begin. Usually I get up an 9 o`clock of morning. I charging do not do, and only I take away an apartment. Then I breakfast and listen news on radio, on reading of newspapers of time does not seize. Then in a bathroom I am washed and clean teeth. In an university I set forth for the half of the first. I drive out a bit earlier, in case of motor-car corks and other incidents. I reach to the university on a bus. My way occupies about twenty minutes.I try to visit all lectures and seminars, but sometimes on domestic circumstances it does not succeed me. We remain after employments sometime, to prepare to employments in a reading-room or computer class. I am a not member of scientific of student association. I return also on a bus.I lie down to sleep usually at even o`clock of evening. P.S. если кто-нибудь возьмётся за помощь, не советуйте пожалуйста онлайн-переводчики и бюро переводов!))

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My working day begins only 15 minutes after my studies begin. Usually I get up at 9 oclock in the morning. After that I am going to my bathroom to brush my teeth and get a shower.  I dont do morning exercises and just immediately go out of my apartment. Then I am having breakfast. If I have extra time I like to listen news on radio or read newspapers during breakfast. I arrive to my university by 12:30 afternoon. I try to go out a bit earlier in case of bad traffic on roads or other incidents. I reach my university by bus. Usually the road takes about twenty minutes. I try to visit all lectures and seminars but sometimes because of internal circumstances I cannot visit all of them. 

Sometimes we stay at the university after our classes to prepare for our next lectures in the library or computer class. I am a not member of scientific of student association. I return home also by bus. I go to sleep usually at 11 oclock in the evening. 

Могу посоветовать не стараться переводить русские речевые обороты в длинных предложениях в онлайн-переводчике. Если брать фразу отдельно - он ее правильно переводит, а в особенно длинном предложении часто путает с необъяснимыми на английском языке выражениями O_o.

Из всех переводчиков советую гугловский - самый приемлимый. Кстати, проверь сама текст тоже, пару раз не знала точно о чем ты хотела сказать) 

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